Questions and Answers

Ahh, i may be able to fix that, i need to chane the level of access. I think it is currently set as me only. Ill change it... By tomorrow

same goes for me....same message as Krieg
I can't view this item...I don't have permission

Try with the new link i have sent

I'm in
 

Excellent!

Wats the software you usec to make the SCI? It could also be helpful to us, yes?
If you go into one note options, you can indicate you initials, and it should then appear next to that you write

anyone adding massive significant changes to the map, any cities or realms that need to be considered?...I'm using some software to sketch up this map based on the OneNote model
where is the void exactly?
and sovereign if it still exists?

Sovereign is the planet I brought in. Its still there, due to The Dealer's Guard taking control of it. But I've changed it to this: A flying city of advanced technology--created by the dealers themselves-- that moves from one place to the next! Right now, its near Ember.
That, and I added Krieg's gladiator arena that's hidden within a canyon the size of city... because its heavily populated.

thanks....mind if I locate this floating city just off shore of everything else
then I can mention that it moves and floats from place to place, by labelling it as such?

Yes. After all, its never in one place and as such its better to be noted off-shore, since its a city that floats high above in the clouds.

so it is still called sovereign?
and what shall I call the arena?
(Krieg's gladiator arena)
mind you I'm only naming places and cities on a land type map, I've created...
no precise detail of city layouts or anything, just borders and city names
just locations
Kaiser where shall I place the void?

Side not:
I really have no idea what I'm gonna call the arena.
But, the name should consider these facts if one was given:
An underground city inhabits the chasm.
The gladiator arena is your typical place of watching people kill eachother for thrills.
It's Krieg's place of dwelling.
There are dark secrets to be discovered by those who enter chasm.

So really, its not just the arena. the chasm and the underground city need to be named. And I've got no clue what to call them.

hmmmm.....name for underground chasm and city...
how about

Altorin (al-TOR-in): meaning black chasm
DelNar (del-N-ar): meaning a place where the dark dwell
Ithari (I-th-ar-i): the fallen

just to get you started

good luck finding a name

I'VE GOT IT! 2 OF THISE NAMES ACTUALLY FIT IN TO WHATBI WAS THINKING OF!!

Name of city: Althari. - Name of arena: Althari Arena.

Chasm: Altorin.

Thanks for helpin' out. KYOKUTAN'NA!!

awesome!
glad I could be of assistance
names of fantasy places is something I love to do

well goodnight...

*trumpet fanfare*
announcing!!
I have completed the first trial version of the map
YAY!
I sort of shuffled the OneNote map around a bit, shifting places to best fit in the space I had, but I can make slight adjustments

I have left out the shapes of the cities, rivers, mountains, etc....it is really just the locations of the cities so you guys can get a better picture of it, I made it from scratch with the same awesome software that made the Shattered Circle Inn, so it can be easily changed

problem is I can't paste it in OneNote, it won't let me

I have created land for both the void and Sovereign and to signify that their either everywhere or floating, I have labelled them as 'Location Varies'

What do you think?

That is a very nice map.

thankyou

though it may need a few more tweaks here and there

True. It's always the case, when it comes to making something.

The Void isn't part of Lorden.
Somewhere on the map there should be a 'Void Gate', but other than that the Void would be a completely separate map.

I understand that now, I'll see what I can do about it

how's this??

perfect

I'm not sure where the gates are to the world(s)
so I left them out of the picture
but it's a nice map that
very.......vast

must have taken ages to make